Blogging health check 1 feedback and response.

As we are currently in the editing process of our music video, I received feedback about the progress of my blog:

"35 blog posts at health check 1:  Hello Hadi.  I've had a good look through your blog.  I am really pleased with your videos that you've recently posted about how the filming went - great use of your blog and gives me a really clear idea of what you've managed to do, what went well and what needs to be completed.  I'm glad you've taken the initiative and completed these.  What I do need to see, which isn't there yet, is reflection on how the pitch went.  What feedback did you get from the class (and me) and what are you going to do in response to this.  There is a mark on the mark scheme for 'revisions in light of feedback' and so I need to see some evidence on the blog in order for this mark to be 'upped' from the C- it is at the moment.  If we look back at the early blog posts - you have some good research (and some still missing: nothing on Mulvey, favourite previous student video, individual homework on setting and costume or synergy - all must be done) and you have some good planning (but again - some still missing - analysis of Ed Sheeran's original video, website and ancillary products; 3 music videos that have influenced your final style ideas for the video).  Make sure that you catch up with these as it would be shame for you to not get a higher mark - I can see that you are putting in a real effort which is great to see.  Remember that the moderator can't see what you do in class or in your group - they have to go by what they can see on the blog and that alone, so make sure that the blog reflects all your hard work.  Good luck!"

In light of the feedback i have done a lot more blogging. I am currently catching up on all the blogs i have missed out on in the research and planning stages. I found this feedback very useful as i now know what i need to do in order to achieve higher marks.