Planning: Feedback from pitch

From the feedback we received from our teacher as well as our class peers I found that they all agreed in the fact that our concept/narrative was all very detailed and clear which made it easier for them to understand our whole pitch.

Improvements to make before we go out filming:

• However, our teacher and peers did have a point in where we could improve which was the name of the artist not fitting with the genre we were going to do.
• Luisio - according to the feedback sounded to Latin American so we have to come up with an alternative and we are deciding whether to change it to Luke plus a second name.
• They all said that our storyboard needed more detail also it needed to be more clear as to what every shot was going to contain such as effect, shot, camera movement and mise en scene.
• As a group we also have to update our schedule plan  as we named locations which in fact we won't be using also putting our schedule plan onto timetoast.