Rough cut feedback

In the lesson where we watched everybody rough cut we gained some advice from our peers and teacher on how to improve our film. It came in helpful as we changed a few things afterwards and it gave us an insight into how other people view our music video.

They gave us some strengths and weaknesses some of these being

Strengths.

• Fade out effect to show the girl was no longer there
• Strong story line
• Lip sync was in time
• locations worked well together

Weaknesses

• The guitar playing needs to be in sync with the music
• needs more obvious effects and transitions
• Panning shot in the pond needed to be more steady. 

From hearing these we decided to make a few changes to our video to improve it

we made the pond shot more steady. Added another base track that we could include obvious effects.